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Monday, August 10, 2009
Bonny Becker: Be Wise, Revise--Middles
Bonny continues through her manuscript, realizing there's something wrong with the middle. She again realizes her middle is too far from the core action of her premise.
A couple of rules from Bonny:
Pay attention to that tiny voice that tells you something is wrong.
Look to condense, compress, distill. Eliminate the good for the great.
"Pay attention to that tiny voice..." great advice!
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