Showing posts with label Elana K. Arnold. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Elana K. Arnold. Show all posts

Saturday, February 11, 2023

Creative Lab: TRUE REVISION with Elana K Arnold and Eliot Schrefer

Creative Lab: TRUE REVISION with Elana K Arnold and Eliot Schrefer

The plan ahead for our 7.5 hours together:

Session 1: What have I made? 

Taking a hard look at what we've actually made, rather than what we intended to make. We'll make a story map and looking at settings.

Session 2: What haven't I considered? We'll look at tension and scene building, as well at the rhythm of five pages. 

Session 3: The full novel diagnostic. We'll leave with a plan for working on the revision when we go home. 


So, friends, it looks like some productive work is in store. I'll give you a peek inside as we move through the three sessions. 

In this first session, we get a peek inside the way Eliot maps plot and Elena shares amazing insight to the ways setting can work even more for our stories. 

Here's a great suggestion and something you can try:

Elana and Eliot send off to consider what we love about our projects. This is an important consideration because we so often look at what's wrong with our work instead of what's right. Elana encourages us to lean into what we love and others love about our work. 

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In session 2, we are looking more micro-level; at sentences, openings, and scenes and how it all relates to the whole. 

Here's a takeaway that might be fun to look at:

Read the first paragraph of THE HUNGER GAMES. Note with each sentence what information it gave you and/or what question(s) has it made you consider. 

A tip from Elana: find what you think is the strongest scene in your book. Let it be the gold standard and know that all of your scenes can be just as good.

Here's a peek at the list generated of what attendees thought were key takeaways from day 1. (The last one will have to remain a mystery.) 



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In session three we are going into manuscript triage, making a list of all the things we need to do in order to get by the end of this draft, and ascribing deadlines that feel realistic. 

Here's a great tip from this morning's session: If you have family and friends who aren't writers, a great way to get feedback from them is to ask them to read the first half of the book and to report back on what they think is going to happen. Then you can decide what you want to fulfill and what you want to subvert. 

If you're wishing you were here in True Revision or were here and still want more, Elana will be teaching her Revision Season course online and she's offering a discount (Spring23). 

Friday, August 5, 2022

An Exploration of Writing About Historical Events with Elana K. Arnold & Brandy Colbert

The full title of this breakout session is "An Exploration of Writing About Historical Events: The Spectrum of Possibilities in Nonfiction."

Elana K. Arnold is the author of many books for and about children and teens. Her novel, Damsel, was a 2018 Michael L. Printz Honor award winner. Her novel What Girls Are Made Of was a finalist for the 2017 National Book Award in Young People’s Literature and the winner of the Golden Kite Award, among other honors. Her middle grade novel A Boy Called Bat was a 2018 Global Read Aloud selection. Elana’s books have been listed on numerous best lists and earned many awards, including Junior Library Guild Selections, an ALAN pick, several selections for the Rise: A Feminist Book Project, a Westchester Fiction Award, a Bank Street Book of the Year, and a Gold Medal in the Moonbeam Children’s Book Award. Elana holds a BA in comparative literature from the University of California at Irvine and a master’s degree in English and creative writing/fiction from UC Davis, where she has taught creative writing and adolescent literature. She teaches in the MFAC program at Hamline University and lives in Southern California.

Brandy Colbert is the award-winning author of several books for children and teens, including Black Birds in the Sky: The Story and Legacy of the 1921 Tulsa Race Massacre, which was a finalist for the American Library Association’s Excellence in Young Adult Nonfiction Award; Stonewall Book Award winner Little & Lion; and The Only Black Girls in Town. Her books have been chosen as Junior Library Guild Gold Standard Selections and have been named to many best-of lists, including the ALA’s Best Fiction for Young Adults and Notable Children’s Books. Her writing has been published in the New York Times, and her short stories and essays have appeared in several critically acclaimed anthologies for young people. She is on faculty at Hamline University’s MFA program in writing for children and lives in Los Angeles.

From the top, Brandy Colbert, ASL sign language interpreter Jenny Blake, and Elana K. Arnold

Elena and Brandy start with a discussion of why they went from writing contemporary fiction to historical fiction — and for Brandy, nonfiction, too.

Brandy considers how her journalism degree helps. She knows news sources, what's a reputable source and not, and has done fact-checking as a freelancer as well. All that background and being "a very detail oriented person" who "really want[s] to get things right." 

Brandy speaks about the research she did for "Black Birds in the Sky." Brandy couldn't go to Tulsa because of the pandemic. She used as main research the Oklahoma committee 2001 report on the Tulsa Race Massacre. Highlighted sections, used the online version as well. Much evidence was destroyed, with people trying to hide this history.

She did a lot of research through ebooks. Didn't want to sensationalize the history. One source she didn't use, because she felt the tone was off - she's critical of an author making up a speech in a nonfiction source. She used materials from local Black historians, and a lot of online resources. Couldn't really speak to survivors. She asked herself, "Do I want to re-traumatize people in their 90s and 100s?" Decided not to - she found great survivor quotes on website for the John Hope Franklin Center for Reconciliation and Peace. Wanted to amplify the survivor voices, finally, after 100 years of them being silenced.

She also used newspaper articles, historical society, magazine articles, documentaries, TV shows showing clothes and cars, etc...

How did Brandy take care of herself as a writer when working with such personal and painful material like the history of the Tulsa Race Massacre?

She recalls writing it in summer of 2020, with the new racial reckoning happening, and watching it all play out and drawing parallels from past to present.

"It was a lot to take..." Brandy admits that "Sometimes, I typed through tears. A lot of anger." And then considers how, "For me, it's therapeutic to sit and write." "I would rather know the history than not know," and it's so important for kids to be educated on what she herself didn't learn. 

She also advises that you have to take breaks, get outside, doing yoga, talk to friends...

1/3 of the YA novel Brandy is working on now is historical. A Black Hollywood family, three perspectives, historical sections going back to 1940s. She's fascinated by old Hollywood, read a few memoirs (like Diahann Carroll's) of Black actresses from that time, and a history book about Black Hollywood 1910-1950s.

For nonfiction, doing the photo research (and getting rights for them) was a surprise for Brandy. Looked at creative commons for photos that were easier to get. Consider photo budget... Got help from the photo researcher at the Tulsa historical society.

Elana loves the research part of it. Like going into the history of Kabala. "Research is always a way in for me" when writing fiction. Especially if she gets stuck. Writing historical fiction scared her at first. Her grandmother told Elana the story of her survival of the Holocaust in Romania after Elana's first book was published, and while Elana tried to write it as a dystopian future novel, she's now re-doing it as a historical novel. She's spent the last four years actively writing drafts of it. 

When writing for kids, Elana says "you have to be at least as committed to the truth, even in fiction." She spoke about how the "particularities of plot can be fictions, but the historical events need to be true."

She found it challenging to make the person in her novel a character and not her Nana.

Elana's research included her finding and reading memoirs, journals, fiction and poetry, written at that time period. She also consulted historical articles, even fables and fairy tales. Her grandmother had tuberculosis at that time, so Elena researched how they treated it back then. She even looked at advertisements about vacations in that area!

Elena also found a Holocaust survivor to read her manuscript, paid her for her labor, and they actually became friends.

How does Elana take care of herself, when working with such personal and painful material like her grandmother's experience in the Holocaust?

Elena felt a responsibility to her siblings to tell their shared history. First draft was her grandmother's life, and then she needed to make it a story. Took years between drafts. "Breaks are important."

She advises that all historical research is personal. It's important to pick topics that resonate for you. 


Final gems:

If you can't find at least two (or three) sources with the same information, be cautious about using that. —Brandy Colbert

Finding the things you didn't know you were going to find - and then putting them into your book - is one of the biggest gifts of research. —Elana K. Arnold

Sunday, August 11, 2019

Elana K. Arnold and Brandy Colbert: Survival Skills for Novelists

Photo of Brandy Colbert by Jesse Weinberg
Veteran, award-winning authors Elana K. Arnold and Brandy Colbert have a number of wonderful books between them (see the partial lists below).

Their session, intended to the published pros in the audience, contained a wealth of information about how to manage their time, creativity, and relationships at this stage of the publishing game.

Community becomes an important part of the process.

There are the bookstores where we do events—here, Brandy likes to send a thank you note every time.

And then there's social media and online communities. Here, a key thing to keep in mind, especially when you're committing stuff to print (even digitally): Remember that your work lives forever. So be careful in what you say, that you don't complain needlessly or without being aware of your audience.

Elana said social media isn't mandatory for writers. There are other ways you can connect with the world. "But if you like it, then great!"
Photo of Elana Arnold by Davis Arnold

Remember why you write

Elana said it can be scary to write when you're thinking about what someone else thinks. Instead, remind yourself why you write. These are her reasons:

  • To explore the things that thrill, terrify and discomfit me
  • To remind myself that I am a human being
  • To remind myself that I am not alone

Challenge yourself

Brandy likes to write books that scare her. Her first MG scared her. Writing from two POVs scared her. But now she knows she can do it!

  • Don't be afraid to start or take on projects that scare you
  • Try something you haven't done before, or retry something you've failed to accomplish
  • Write a book that you don't know how to write
  • Stretch during revision into a new shape


Remember that publishing is an unpredictable business

We don't have control over a lot of things:

  • If agents or editors will move or quit
  • If our book will win awards
  • If our book will "sell well"
  • If people will "like" or "read" our book
  • Almost everything else


Some of Brandy's books
Little & Lion
The Revolution of Birdie Randolph
Pointe
Finding Yvonne


Some of Elana's books
Damsel
What Girls Are Made of
A Boy Called Bat
The Red Hood
What Riley Wore

Friday, August 3, 2018

Elana K. Arnold: On Tension


Elana K. Arnold is the award-winning writer of books for kids and teens, including National Book Award finalist What Girls Are Made Of.


It's our job as writers to create tension and release it. It's the spinal cord of the book. It gives the book energy and movement. 

On the other side of tension is comfort, which comes from the relief. 

"Let me hurt you, so later I can heal you." That's what we do as writers. "A writers job is to take away comfort to create tension." 

Any time we create imbalance, that causes tension.

How?
  • change the frame
    • zoom in
    • zoom out
  • Speed thing up, slow things down, suspend time
  • Hyper-focus on details
  • Let details wash over the reader and run together
  • Focus on something mundane and wrong for the situation
  • Add a ticking clock
  • Give someone a secret
  • Dialogue 
  • Lie
  • Present a paradox
  • Use cycles to your advantage
Our job as writers is to:
  • push the reader
  • unbalance the reader
  • give the reader the pleasure of being uncomfortable

Panel: Truth vs. Innocence In Children's Books: Elana K. Arnold

Elana K. Arnold

Elana K. Arnold writes books for and about children and teens. Her young adult novel What Girls Are Made Of was a finalist for the 2017 National Book Award and the winner of the Golden Kite Award for Young Adult Literature. Her middle grade novels, A Boy Called Bat and Bat and the Waiting Game, are Junior Library Guild selections. Some of her books have been included on School Library Journal’s Best Books list; Kirkus’ Best Teen Books list; the Bank Street Best Book list; the YALSA Best Fiction for Young Adults list; and the New York, Chicago, and Los Angeles Public Libraries’ Best Books of the Year list.

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Highlights of what Elana shared:

Do you think about dark versus light when you're writing?

"Whatever you've been filled with is your material... That's my well that I pull from."

She speaks of how her first two books came from a well of body shame, and that writing Infandous and What Girls Are Made Of emptied her well of that emotion.





And then, the well filled again, and this time, it was full of rage. That rage, and wanting to empty the well of that hot, bubbling rage completely, formed her upcoming book, Damsel.



How do you deal with writing painful scenes?

"In What Girls Are Made Of there's a terrible scene of a dog surrendered by a group of kids after they'd tortured it, and they have to decide to either save it or put it down." She tells us about how she wrote that scene, the prep work, and then sitting down on the day she was going to write it, "Blinders on - only think about exact next sentence."

And how do you respond to critics who say that your books are too dark for young readers?

"Books are a wonderful place to practice saying no." If we don't allow young people to feel uncomfortable or unsafe in books, how do we expect them to know what to do when they feel uncomfortable or unsafe in life? We want them to put down the book if it's too uncomfortable, just like we want them to put down the drink, or leave the party.

And Elana shares one of her mantras,
"It's none of my business who reads my book."

The panel continues with lots more great stories and insights, as well as favorite reader letter stories.

Panel: Truth vs. Innocence in Children's Books Panel Begins



The panelists before starting the panel


Moderated by Linda Sue Park, the panel features, left to right: Brandy Colbert, Elana K. Arnold, Carolyn Mackler, and Erin Entrada Kelly.