Friday, July 7, 2017
Transforming Life into Art: KIM TURRISI heart emoticon heart emoticon heart emoticon
Kim talks about her path to publication. She was getting rejection after rejection on another project, and while talking with an author friend about how to fix this original project, the friend asked Kim if anything important or memorable happened to her while she was a teen. Kim said yes... When she was 15, Kim's sister committed suicide. The author friend told Kim that that was her next story, but though Kim was worried the subject was too hard and too close to work on, she began. Kim's book deals with the aftermath of suicide, the sort of book she didn't have access to when she was 15.
Emma Dryden reminds us these are not memoirs or autobiographies, but novels inspired and influenced by these real events. Emma asks about the areas where the panelists strayed away from the truth to better serve the book or story of the character.
Kim knew who her protagonist was, but she needed to figure out all the ancillary characters required for the setting of the teen grief camp. She spent a lot of time fleshing those backstories out, they are an amalgam of dozens of friends and family members distilled into a small group of camp goers.
Some of the writing process was very painful: Kim put her sister's suicide note on her wall, it helped Kim challenge herself every day to be authentic in her writing. Her editor readied her for the pain of potentially editing out authentic moments of Kim's life for the book by telling Kim that her job as editor is to make every reader turn the page, some of these edits may be difficult for Kim, but that they're doing this all to ultimately serve the book and its readers best.
Kim's note on writing from a painful personal experience: With any book where you are going to go deep, you're not going to get it right on the first or second or third draft, maybe not even by the 12th, but you have to keep working to get there to make the book resonate.
Friday, July 31, 2015
Meg Wolitzer Keynote - Switching Hats: Writing for Adults and Young Adults
Her YA novel is Belzhar, and for middle grade readers she has The Fingertips of Duncan Dorfman.
She talked to us about writing for both adults and younger readers.
She started by describing a horrible question people ask writers at parties: "Would I have heard of you?"
The right answer ... "In a more just world, yes."
Her world involves going back and forth from one literary world to another.
"Being a writer is really about freedom," she said. "All of you should have the freedom to say I want to write the next Hunger Games. Then switch and say I want to write the AARP games. A scary tale."
Meg had a secret weapon in the fight to become a writer: her mother, an 85-year-old writer who is still publishing books.
"My mother was the only writer in town, and the exciting thing for me was that the checkout person would let us take out as many books as we wanted."
People often ask what's going to happen to books, but Meg feels encouraged. It's natural to see narrative all around in the world (including in one-celled amoebas). And the stories we tell are very reflective of us.
"A novel is a sort of concentrated version of who a person is," she said, "a boullion cube of concentrated sensibility."
Another way to do this is to write the book you would have loved to read as a teen. She once had a book taken from her because it was for older kids, and it suddenly became irresistibly alluring.It's about a girl who was sent to a school for emotionally fragile, highly intelligent teenagers. The students there are all reunited with the things they've lost, taking the short view of their sorrows. The characters she creates are filtered through her own humanness. It's taking them and making them us. We're all different, and every novel has lots of ways in. Points of view can vary.
Switching hats means we have a lot of roles. The one we occupy among our friends and family. The one you wear when you write autobiographically. The one you wear when you're writing about about growing up in the 12th century.
"Write about what obsesses you because that is the one that people will identify with," she said, "and that will be one I definitely want to read.
Friday, August 2, 2013
YA Worldbuilding Panel: Veronica Rossi
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She joined Cynthia Hand, Brodi Ashton, and Tahereh Mafi in a panel moderated by author Ransom Riggs about world-building in young adult novels.
The book is about a world fragmented into two groups. One lives in an enclosed city with technology, no disease, long lifespans. There's also a primitive, tribal society vulnerable to storms and hunger.
"I did not know what I was doing when I started out" with worldbuilding. "I went with where my interests were."
She started with the question about how dependent we are on our technology and devices. Where are we going to go with that? That became the underpinning of the series.
She also did lots of research (which included staring at walls). A key bit of learning: no matter how much pre-planning you do, you can't figure it all out beforehand.
Did she have any problems in her second book?
The biggest challenge was to keep the enclosed city alive in the story even though it mostly focused on the outer world.
Her character had to feel at home in the inner world even though she wasn't there. She used the virtual reality device she created in the first book, where characters could really experience a place they weren't in, to keep it alive.World-building pro tip from a wiser Veronica Rossi: Don't create a world with two distinctive cultures in your first attempt at world building.
Did writing through two sets of eyes affect things?
This was by design. She wanted to see how a girl from a protected society would look at people who lived a primitive, tribal existence. Playing with each character's lens was fun for her.How do you suspend a reader's disbelief as you're creating a fantastical world?
Everything that happens in her story is a leaping off point. Her characters love fiercely. They fight fiercely. They make mistakes. They betray people. That is the thing that allows people to relate to the story. Even though the world is not like ours, they are going through the same kind of hardships and stumbles, first love--"all those great things we experience"--and they relate to that.
Did you start with setting or character?
They really came about at the same time. "I really started with opposites. Past, future. Male, female. I wanted to play with what happens when you put opposed things together."
For her, character is an elusive thing. It's as though the characters are already there, but she uncovers them or reveals them from the fog of her unconscious. That's a process of just thinking about the story and planning as much in advance as feels good. "The writing is where it all comes to life."
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Monday, August 10, 2009
CHRIS EBOCH: "What I Learned From Nancy Drew: Tools for Fast-Paced Plotting"

CHRIS EBOCH: "What I Learned From Nancy Drew: Tools for Fast-Paced Plotting"
It LITERALLY was a packed room for Chris Eboch's "Fast-Paced Plotting" lecture. So packed that (NO exaggeration), about a couple dozen people sat in the AISLES, taking copious notes.
Chris provided a handout with extremely detailed notes on plotting plus book recommendations. Some highlights from her handout and from the lecture:
-- She showed the original ending for a Nancy Drew cliffhanger followed by the extensive revision and discussed the reasons behind those changes. Her editor said, "I would like to see more of a slow build-up toward the intense action. In horror movies, it's always the ominous music and the main character slowly opening the closet door that scares us the most, not the moment right after she opens the door."
-- Some books she recommended included her 2009 book, "Haunted: The Ghost on the Stairs" and "Haunted" The Riverboat Phantom" from Aladdin. She also recommended Louise Spiegler's "The Amethyst Road" and "Self-Editing for Fiction Writers" by Renni Browne and Dave King."
-- Add subplot: "If you can't pack your main plot any fuller, try using subplots to add complexity and length to your manuscript. A subplot may be only loosely related to your main plot, but still add complications."
-- Chris also advised, "To keep tensions high, make sure your characters are struggling enough." She mentioned the "Rule of Three" where a character tries and fails a first time, tries and fails a second time, and then tries and succeeds, achieving the goal by the third time. "If the character succeeds on the first tyr, then we don't believe the problem was that difficult for that character." She said it's "satisfying" when the character finally achieves the goal by the third time and proves the problem was a "worthy challenge." Although the "Rule of Three" is used in picture books, Chris advises that in novels, there are often many steps beyond just three tries, and writers must make sure these many complications always push the story forward.
Overall, Chris had a very detailed and extensive lecture with many great tips on how to improve the plot of your novel and to make sure the pacing never drags. The handout she distributed among the standing-room-only crowd was especially valuable with her meticulous notes. Another fantastic example of the wonderful information you can learn at this conference!
Posted by Paula Yoo
DONNA GEPHART: "12 3/4 Ways to Tickle Young Readers' Funny Bones"

DONNA GEPHART: "12 3/4 Ways to Tickle Young Readers' Funny Bones"
Some hilarious higlights from 2009 Sid Fleischman Humor Award winner Donna Gephart's panel:
-- She provided handouts for everyone with a list of techniques and details to hone one's humor skills.
-- She advises taking risks. "Mine your embarrassment," she said, discussing how writers should not be afraid to talk about real life embarrassing moments.
-- "Embarrassment is funny but humiliation is not," she said. "You want to empathize with your character. Readers want to laugh, not cringe."
-- She gave a writing exercise in which conference goers had to do: List embarrassing things that happened to you or list things that embarrassed you as a kid.
-- She suggested paying attention to the "sound of language" as another tool to write humor. For example, the "K" sound is funny, such as "Chicken is funny. Roast beef is not. Pickle is funny. Cucubmer is not. Twinkie is funny. Pie is not."
-- She also advised using exaggeration and understatement as tools for writing humor. Examples included "Exaggeration: referring to a tropical breeze as a hurricane" and "Understatement: referring to a hurricane as a tropical breeze."
-- Ultimately, she says writers should not TRY to be funny. "Forced humor is no fun for anyone."
-- She also gave a handout listing funny picture books, early readers, chapter books, and MG/YA novels.
It was a packed room where people participated with a lot of enthusiasm to Donna's writing exercises. And yes, there was much laughter!
Yet another shining example of great lectures provided by award-winning writers at the SCBWI national conference.
Posted by Paula Yoo
Sunday, August 9, 2009
Golden Kite Awards: Sid Fleischman Award Winner Donna Gephart

Saturday, August 8, 2009
WENDY LOGGIA, "I Wanted to Love This: 7 Reasons Why Your Manuscript Gets Declined"

WENDY LOGGIA, "I Wanted to Love This: 7 Reasons Why Your Manuscript Gets Declined"
Delacorte editor Wendy Loggia's panel focused on the manuscripts that ALMOST were accepted but were not quite ready for primetime. (She was not focusing on manuscripts that were obviously not ready at all, she was focusing on the manuscripts that are ALMOST ready to go.) She felt these 7 tips would help SCBWI members and aspiring writers as they revised their manuscripts.
WENDY LOGGIA BIO: Executive editor of Delacorte Press, an imprint of Random House Children's books; the focus at Delacorte is almost exclusively on middle grade and YA novels. She is the editor of THE SISTERHOOD OF THE TRAVELING PANTS series by Ann Brashares, the GEMMA DOYLE trilogy by Libba Bray, as well as several debut novels by SCBWI members including Kristin O'Donnell Tubb's AUTUMN WINIFRED OLIVER DOES THINGS DIFFERENT and Georgia Bragg's MATISSE ON THE LOOSE.
Wendy looks for a strong narrative voice, great stories, and for writers that display a clear authorial hand. She joked about spending "nine years crushing people's dreams" but then discussed the real reasons as to why she will pass on book submissions.
Some highlights from Wendy Loggia's panel:
-- She tells aspiring writers always to think about WHY someone will want to buy your book. They are going to pull out their wallet and spend 18 dollars or more, so make your book worth it.
-- She will pass on a manuscript that is "too similar to other novels I've worked on." Examples included writers who love THE SISTERHOOD OF THE TRAVELING PANTS series which she had edited, so they submit a novel just like it. She also says she will pass on books that are too similar to other books already in the marketplace. She says they have received a flood of similar Twilight vampire books, books about werewolves, etc.. "Instead of jumping on a trend, write what feels true to you."
-- Voice, voice voice. "I may love the concept, but I can't connect to the voice. The voice wasn't special enough, I don't see teens/tweens connecting to the voice, I think the voice is meant for adult readers. It may have great moments but if there's too much telling or not a compelling voice, I will pass on it."
-- Sometimes she will pass on a book if the author seems to be too much trouble to work with. "Working on a book is like a marriage," she says. "Editors and authors spend a lot of time together sharing ideas. It's not all fun and games. If person feels like trouble before process has even started, I don't want to get involved." She will google people who have submitted their work and read their blogs as part of her research to make her decision. She said "it's like a job interview."
These are just some of the tips she offered. All of Wendy's seven tips were all very helpful and telling to the standing-room only crowd at the main ballroom for both aspiring writers and published veteran writers. Again, another reason why this conference is so great - you get exclusive information that can really help you improve your writing and help you on your journey towards publication.
Brenda Bowen: "Agents Panel: The State of the Business" Part 2
- On revising a client's work: "I was working with an aurhor on a picture book, and he revised it couple times. I said it was good and he said, 'Let's see what an editor says.' (Much laughter from the audience. Brenda shrugs.) Well, I have a different hat on now."
- As a former editor, Brenda says certain agents who have excellent reputations or cache can influence editors' expectations. When she was an editor, Brenda says, "I was aware that some agents' names in the inbox meant that what was attached, although maybe not perfect for me, was going to be really good for someone in the house, and that it was ready to go. I'd like to be one of those agents, like you folks (she nods to the panel)."
- Brenda believes in a long-term relationship with her clients. "I spent my time nurturing creative careers. It's not good for us to make one sale and never sell your work again. You have to imagine a partnership, to trust that we're going to give our best to each other and that we'll be there for the long haul."
BRENDA BOWEN: "Agents Panel: The State of the Business" Part 1

Friday, August 7, 2009
Editors Panel: Ari Lewin, Sr. Ed. Disney/Hyperion

Editors Panel: "Success Stories: Four Editors Distill the Secrets of a Successful Book:
Focus on: ARI LEWIN, Senior Editor of Disney/Hyperion
Ari Lewin discussed the popular and award-winning stand alone fantasy series, "THE HEIR CHRONICLES" by author Cinda Williams Chima. The first book was a contemporary fantasy set in real world Ohio called THE WARRIOR HEIR. Ari discussed how the book did not have a huge marketing campaign - there was no big book tour. It was "just your basic big publishing house campaign" in which they gave out bookmarks and galleys at various conferences and bookstores.
But she said the book began winning many awards, such as the Kirkus BBYA in 2008 and the Voyas Perfect Teens 2007 list and positive reviews. Unlike other fantasy novels, Cinda's series were a collection of stand alone novels. The second book was not a sequel but a stand alone book featuring a different character. She called it a "companion piece."
Ari stressed that a series of stand alone books often have an advantage over actual series because new readers are more willing to read the latest book because there's no pressure to have read the previous books. In addition, awards committees are reluctant sometimes to give awards to books that readers need to have read the previous books in order to understand and enjoy the latest one.
Air said Cinda's real world fantasy setting was real and familiar to kids - it featured "a familiar world of a teenager with a huge secret" and that made it accessible to kids who normally did not read fantasy.
She also showed some sketches of the original cover of the first book versus the final version, and explained how the original cover was a sketch and looked too "manga" and did not fit the tone of the book (it skewed too young). She said book covers are very important when it comes to books succeeding and finding an audience.
BUT ultimately, Ari concluded that "at the end of the day, I know how hard Cinda has worked to perfect her craft and promote her work. The biggest secret to a book's success sometimes is that the book is good and the book is worthy."
Frank Portman, "Cultivating Your Teen Voice"

Second morning panel I'm attending is:
FRANK PORTMAN, "Cultivating Your Teen Voice"
(Pictured above is Frank and his trusty guitar!)
Some quick highlights:
Frank Portman began his panel by performing one of his songs on guitar called "You're the Only One." He talked about writing in an authentic teen voice and read an excerpt from his novel KING DORK that made everyone laugh.
Funny moment: One conference goer asked, "Are you texting?" He smiled and held up his cell phone and said, "No, I'm keeping track of time." :)
What books did he like? "I was very interested in comics when I was a kid. But I did read several books, so I kind of know what I'm talking about."
"YA is great because it's wide open. It's a tradition that goes back a long way. That said, I think it's a terrible mistake to tailor your writing to a demographic in any kind of direct way because it will be fake."
He warned aspiring writers NOT to think that "because you're writing from a teen POV, it must be less complicated - simpler, dumber - than a regular book. That will not produce a good book."
He discussed the conundrum of how "sex sells" but it also frightens publishers because of the age group (his book is hilarious and very candid - he jokes about his editor called once and said, "Frank, we have to talk about the nipple problem." LOL!) But he says there's a difference between overt vulgarity and a realistic sense of how to approach the topic of sex in YA literature. In fact, his next novel will be from the point of view of a female teen character!
Overall, a packed room that loved Frank's music performance, honesty, and humorous presentation.




