A musician, former bookseller and one-time proofreader, he founded ColonWatch (not for proctologists) and The Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to English.
He's also the son of the beloved and much-missed Sid Fleischman. How jealous are we that he got to grow up listening to Sid's books being read aloud as they were written?
To make up for that colossal injustice, Paul is talking today about Surviving the Novel.
He's starting his talk by likening novels to the snow-capped Himalayas (particularly for people who are used to writing in short form). He knows how we feel--he just wrote his first adult novel and hoped he could hit 200 pages. (He did that and more. So much more.)
It's easy to feel overwhelmed with the "big glop" of a thing that is your novel. To combat this feeling, he organizes. He sets up separate documents for all of his material in sections like these:
- The actual manuscript
- A "working out" document--the various mental exercises where he makes his decision on cast, scenes. He states the problems, brainstorms, writes problems to those solutions and solutions to those problems.
- His outline
- Research--keep a running list of research questions
- Unused lines
- Back matter--the guts of the book. This is kind of like the outline, but includes facts about characters. Acknowledgments. Possible titles.
- Keep a list of continuity. If someone is wearing a red dress, is she still wearing it later that night?
- You might not need it in a picture book, but you will in a novel. He researched women's clothes for his latest: "That's a 10-book novel in an of itself. Who knew what goes on in your closet!" He also researched pugs and dancing. (I must read this book!)
- He set a book in San Francisco and used Google street view to look at what the streets looked like.
- Every word should be there for a reason, even though the book is longer. As with a picture book, "You weigh every word that comes into your book. It's like a passenger coming on the gang plank."
- Read your work straight through. Highlight it, but don't stop to fix. Ernest Hemingway started every day by reading his current book from the beginning. "No wonder his later years were kind of difficult."
- Don't be surprised if you have to rewrite. That's the writing life. There's no way around but through.
- A hot tip for revision: When you revise, make notes on what you did. You might want to go back to an earlier version
Paul's speech was so full of quotes, you could compile them in a book. Here are some favorites:
"This [the outline] is holding back the Barbarian hordes of chaos from overwhelming your book."
"In a picture book, you can afford to rewrite your whole manuscript. You're not going to want to do this with your novel."
"The older I get, the more I write like my father, who was quite the improviser...Now, I trust much more things coming together."
"Back when the pencil ruled the earth, like the dinosaur, you could still read what you crossed out."
"A colon is the perfect piece of punctuation. It's not a period. It's not a comma..."
"Research should be like a slip. It should be there, but it should never show."
"If you have the same spouse you had at the beginning of your novel, that person might be a little tired of your travails by the end."
"When you are writing a novel, you are part of a community that stretches beyond your family, beyond your critique group. You're part of a community that stretches across the world and across time. With luck, you come out of it stronger and wiser and you might even want to do it again."